The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrates the online sales trends in the retail sectors o New Zealand within a ten year comparison in 2003 and 2013.
The charts show a massive increase of about 12% in sales for film and music from 2003 to 2013. In 2003, sales for film and music was on 21% which grew over the ten-year period. The biggest decline, however is under clothing which began at 24% in 2003 and ended up at 16% in 2013.
Sales for books also increased by a mere 3% which started at 19% in 2003 and finished at 32% in 2013. As for travel, there was also a huge decline of approximately 7%, respectively at 36% in 2003 and at 29% in 2013.
In summary, the buying preference of New Zealand's population has changed over the past ten years, Online retail sales for both film, music and books has seen remarkable growth from 2003- 2013. Whereas, sales for clothes and travel has declined over the past ten years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...03 and ended up at 16% in 2013. Sales for books also increased by a mere 3% wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, whereas, as for, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45508982036 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26595877831 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8101996547 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291109689846 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152041780654 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107063871034 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21602756017 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107603039857 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.