Few people like to buy technical device as soon as they are lunched while, other like to buy after the reviews. Which do you prefer and why?
In modern era, due to the surging demand of technology, people invented various things. Some people like to purchase new invention products as soon as possible for boast off and in excited to products. However, I prefer to buy new invented things after get the knowledge about it. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, purchasing new device after some months so it helps to save money. In business world, new device launch their price always high but gradually decrease the product price with time. My experience compelling this idea, two years ago, Apple Company launched I Phone 6 plus, at time my brother bought this phone 60000 rupees but I bought same phone 30000 rupees after three month. It is huge money difference. I always believe to save money which is use for my expenses, so I have not longer depended on my parents for pocket money.
In addition, I can also protect my money from wastage because many times product useless. In advertisement product mislead to customer but when some people give review then, person get true information. For instance, one year ago, I planned to buy car. My sister and I went to car showroom and we decided to purchase I-20 car. Next day, I read some review of car that I realize that I make wrong thought about the car. The car does not give enough mileage and huge maintenance of car. Accordingly, I believe that first get the review of products and after buy it.
Secondly, another advantage of purchasing product late is getting various choice of product. Many companies strategies that launching new product after they also launch related product in few months. Sometimes previous product quality was less pleasant than after products. Again take example of I Phone Company, every year company launch new I phone with variety of feature. In I phone 6 I heard lots of complains from the friends that it was hang out and sometimes screen become plain white and keyboard not worked. So, that time I bought Samsung due to good review and still I use that phone.
In conclusion, although many people purchase new invented device at time for maintaining high status in society, I believe to get review of device before purchasing it. Old items not only save money but also get the huge choice to purchasing other items with good features.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...us things. Some people like to purchase new invention products as soon as possible for boast ...
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Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ght same phone 30000 rupees after three month. It is huge money difference. I always ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...tect my money from wastage because many times product useless. In advertisement produ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76354679803 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42438612572 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514778325123 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0831353914 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5833333333 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123599128817 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036957775176 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425812925971 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742485388663 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464820744594 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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