You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Mr.Brown,
I am Janani and I am working in 'Abode software' as senior analytical engineer. I am writing this letter in relation with the seminar, that is to be conducted by our company on subject, 'Latest technologies in visual communications'. I would be grateful, if you can share the below details with me so that I can make a few arrangements accordingly.
Foremost, I would like to know the dates in which the meet is to be held. Though I am aware that the entire schedule spans for a month, I am not sure about the exact agenda. It would be helpful, if you can let me know the same. Moreover, a detailed account of the various topics to be covered in the seminar will help me in deciding the relevance between my work and the seminar.
Furthermore, kindly provide me with the lodging and boarding details. I will be travelling alone and will be landing in Toronto airport. Kindly, notify me if there will be someone to pick me up at the location or if I have to come on my own. In any case, I will need the hotel name and also the total expense involved, as I have to raise request for reimbursement at my office.
Awaiting your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Janani.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Brown
Dear Mr.Brown, I am Janani and I am working in Abo...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the Latest'.
Suggestion: , the Latest
...o be conducted by our company on subject, Latest technologies in visual communications. ...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... technologies in visual communications. I would be grateful, if you can share the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49074074074 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71597923591 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606481481481 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2568803658 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6153846154 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133019046422 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443796950713 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049615961875 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759419551171 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714284115559 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.