Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers influenced by advertisements. What can be done to protect them
In recent decades, commercials have been attracting a great deal of media attention due to its substantial impacts on customers' purchasing behaviours. Although the prooblems assciciated with influenced individual are pronounced, they are not without solutions
Advertisements could culminate in undesirable repurcussions on the customers. First, Due to an increasing demand for sales boost, Enterprises have a propensity to exaggerate the products's quality, which could put the consumers' health in jeopardy. For example, suggestible individuals are usually enticed to purchase some products with poisonous chemicals advertised on television, which coule make them more sensitive to some food-borne diseases especially cancers and diarherra. In addition, people are misled by the functions and features of some gadget advertisement, which is a waste of money. In fact many Vietnamese people are deceived to purchase some Chinese cellphones, which could itself deteriorate after a month without any external damages.
However there are several initiatives that the official authorities should undertake for the customers, safety. First, An increase in the cost of advertisements on mainstream media could be deterrent for the number of television commercials. This means that enterprises will be forced to conduct alternative product-promoting plans, which would approach the customers in more realistic and effective ways. Second, The government should impose heavy fines on negative advertisement. This would make the companies think twice if they have an intention of creating an unrealistic advertising videos as the pecunary damages could be equivalent to the profits they will earn.
In conclusion, commercial materials have an negative impacts on individuals' health and purchasing power. Some governmental legislations in would be instrumental in mitigating this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01115241636 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30410293815 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7818692041 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100929185467 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033709399343 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375982993859 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533150999876 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241139748432 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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