Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise.
Describe what action you will take.
Dear Mr. and Mrs.Red,
I hope that you are doing great. It is a shame that, even though we live next door, we have not got a change to know one another. However, I am writing this letter to apologize for the inconvenience we had caused you yesterday. I feel ashamed that I was not aware of it until I read your letter in which you had expressed your grievance.
Following the theft that had occurred in our neighborhood last week, my family decided to install a theft alarm in our house. Yesterday, we had installed it and were testing whether we could hear the alarm for any corner of the house. We carried it out during midday, so that we do not create nuisance to the surroundings.
Nevertheless, the mistake is on our part, as it had disturbed your child's nap. We hope you understand how deep we regret for our act and forgive us. Moreover, as a sign of fresh start to our relationship, kindly accept the box of sweets, which I have sent along with this letter.
Regards,
Janani.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Red
Dear Mr. and Mrs.Red, I hope that you are doing great. It...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nevertheless, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48351648352 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59021502255 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631868131868 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0142595836 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160532565509 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644982203273 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784713873188 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920115459133 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948195852682 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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