Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
As is known to all, everybody has his or her own view on selecting clothes. The clothes somebody likes very much may be very ugly in others' opinion. Some People say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. I agree with that because I think culture and character are two vital factors for a person to choose their dress.
Firstly culture is key factor on people selecting dress. Culture is related to people's religion closely. There are Christian, Muslim and Hindu in the world. And their dressings are quite different. Christian likes to wear suits, shirts and skirts, while Muslim prefer a Arabian traditional gowns. And female Hindu would like to wear the Indian mass. Therefore, you can know a person's culture from their clothes easily. Because people from different culture will choose different style of clothes.
Secondly, character is another important factor for a person to choose their clothes. For example, a person with bad temper would like some tight suits because they want to keep stress and refreshing at all times. However, a person with gentle temper prefers some loose clothes. So they can relax themselves and keep calm at any time.
In conclusion, everyone's clothes are related to the combination of culture and character. So we can know his or her culture, religion and even where he or she comes from. In other way, we can also tell a lot what his or her character is. And we can even find a right way to talk to a stranger according to his or her dresses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'clothes'' or ''s'?
Suggestion: clothes'; 's
... her own view on selecting clothes. The clothes somebody likes very much may be very ug...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...at it is possible to tell a lot about a persons culture and character from their choice...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
... selecting dress. Culture is related to peoples religion closely. There are Christian, ...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'Hindus'?
Suggestion: Hindus
...losely. There are Christian, Muslim and Hindu in the world. And their dressings are q...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... shirts and skirts, while Muslim prefer a Arabian traditional gowns. And female H...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'gown'?
Suggestion: gown
...ile Muslim prefer a Arabian traditional gowns. And female Hindu would like to wear th...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sons culture from their clothes easily. Because people from different culture will choo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75185185185 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41346531254 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4807900208 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.15 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363190756609 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110041104391 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165632085415 0.0667982634062 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215951347731 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138617863186 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.