The bar chart below shows Scotland’s to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates goods exported by Scotland to other regions of United Kingdom and to the rest of the world in 2014. Export products are categorized into nine groups based on different industries and units are measured in pound sterling.
Overall, exports within the UK accounted for smaller sectors compared to that worldwide in all industries mentioned with one exception. While the rest of the UK imported the majority of Scotland Chemical and Mineral products and the least of Agriculture, Forestry, Fishing and mining services, other countries in the world aims at Scotland’s imports of Business Services and Financial, Hotels and Restaurant Services at the expense of Electrical and Instrument Engineering sector.
In term of Electrical and Instrument Engineering Industry, exports to the rest of the UK surpassed that to the rest of the world (4 and 2.3 billion respectively).
Nevertheless, in other industrial sectors, Scotland’s exports to the rest of the world considerably overweighed the counterpart to other regions pf the UK.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48170731707 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19895390211 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5225986223 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.833333333 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270612409647 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143906543465 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092122579081 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17712618216 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215697054423 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.