To reverse a decline in listener numbers, our owners have decided that WWAC must change from its current rock-music format. The decline has occurred despite population growth in our listening area, but that growth has resulted mainly from people moving here after their retirement. We must make listeners of these new residents. We could switch to a music format tailored to their tastes, but a continuing decline in local sales of recorded music suggests limited interest in music. Instead we should change to a news and talk format, a form of radio that is increasingly popular in our area."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
According to the author, there is a decline in cosmetic sales and this problem will be solved with the use of suresales seminar. Although It is not acceptable for some of the people to use new management skills to improve the company’s business, it is proven by the scientist thanks to science we can tackle the almost problem. There are the number of reason worth to mention, such as, people use this product in variety of cases and each of them is successful, some investigation take place by reputable business magazine is also guarantee the success of this process and last but not least for poor sales they should do something as soon as possible.
Firstly, all around the world use one new method of management and it works properly. So it is understandable why other companies try to adjust to the new method. As in the case of the example, company tech which produces software application. This company also suffer from the decline in sales. However, having used this new method help, they overcome this obstacle. Hence, using this seminar have positive point in the number of cases.
Secondly, in nowaday’s life, the news will spread as soon as possible by the use of the internet and magazine. Therefore, Magazines and newspaper are known for their state-of-art news especially the reputable ones. It is a difficult task to gain the trust of publicity. Furthermore, people like to read about keynote in the well-known newspaper such as Times and “Keiyan”. Since they like what they see and is influenced by these sources so easier than other ways of communication. As an epitome, while people look into the columns of the newspaper about around the globe. They see eye-catching advertisements and become interested more and more to this advertisement instead of the mean article. Ergo, people like to see the advertisement from reliable sources, so the newspaper can become a reliable source, we can easily accept the new stuff and gain novel experience. Therefore, it is understandable why people accept some fact from the different top notch magazine.
In conclusion, it is an acceptable fact that dean of company sometimes need to update the management to improve the work condition this will leads to improve in profit. In this area, they can use a reliable source like other company guideline or even ask professional like people who work at a reputable magazine. Hence, this is acceptable they use business seminar for improving their asset.
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- "The best way to reverse Aura Cosmetic's recent decline in profitability is to require each new employee in Aura's sales division to enroll in the popular SureSale seminar. After all, apparel company DressRite recently incorporated SureSale's week-long se 50
- To reverse a decline in listener numbers, our owners have decided that WWAC must change from its current rock-music format. The decline has occurred despite population growth in our listening area, but that growth has resulted mainly from people moving he 16
- "Several factors indicate that KNOW radio can no longer succeed as a rock-and-roll music station. Consider, for example, that the number of people in our listening area over fifty years of age has increased dramatically, while our total number of listener 58
- Two years ago, radio station WCQP in Rockville decided to increase the number of call-in advice programs that it broadcast; since that time, its share of the radio audience in the Rockville listening area has increased significantly. Given WCQP's recent s 58
- "The best way to reverse Aura Cosmetic's recent decline in profitability is to require each new employee in Aura's sales division to enroll in the popular SureSale seminar. After all, apparel company DressRite recently incorporated SureSale's week-long se 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...inar. Although It is not acceptable for some of the people to use new management skills to ...
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Line 1, column 537, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'guaranteed'.
Suggestion: guaranteed
... by reputable business magazine is also guarantee the success of this process and last bu...
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Line 5, column 967, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
...ple accept some fact from the different top notch magazine. In conclusion, it is an ac...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...to improve the work condition this will leads to improve in profit. In this area, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 55.5748502994 108% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 413.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0411622276 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91899440719 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503631961259 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 705.55239521 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.4414598436 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.324526521 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.70786347227 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0585437072361 0.218282227539 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216228656138 0.0743258471296 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318683685071 0.0701772020484 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0377506106337 0.128457276422 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013085599054 0.0628817314937 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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