Some people think that the use of animal for experimentation is cruel. Other think it is good for the development of science. Discuss the two sides and give your opinion.
Most of the scientists have been doing research to bring the light in the medical profession. Few people hope that theexperiments on animals are really annoying whereas others are of opined that it is much necessary to carry out the activity as it is upgrading the science and technology for better healthy life. This essay will discuss the two sides of the opinions.
To begin with, the growth of science and technology is been occurring due to experiments carried out on animals such as mice, rats, pigs, and monkeys. Researchers during their study able to address the several truths and facts and they are in a position to explain the fatal disease and its occurrence, the treatment, and prevention. For instance, Dr.Louis Pasteur, a famous scientist after several experiments in his study discovered the causative organism called Mycobacterium tuberculae which is responsible for a high incidence rate of tuberculosis disease. his contributions towards medical profession rescued the patients from the cultural belief of that T.B is caused due to curse from God.
On the other hand, being a human beings on this earth we should take care of animals. This is our responsibility because every kind of creature has its own role in the ecosystem cycle. Animals can not express their pain as of human beings we should not take this as an opportunity to conduct research trials. As animals, they do have right to live. For example, a film actress in Tollywood called Mrs.Amla has opened a Blue cross of Hyderabad, where she accommodates all most all kinds of pets.
To conclude, human beings are given special importance compare to the life of animals. there is a need for growth and development in science and technology so experiments are performed on animals. This, in turn, will increase the Nations economy and productivity by decreasing the mortality rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8351202617 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7983164715 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126542239519 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387857929424 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482662747836 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800108210489 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439412664446 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.