You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear sir/madam,
I was one of the passenger who took flight from Delhi to Hyderabad on march 25 at 3.00 pm. unfortunately i did not receive my suitcase on that day. so i have been complained about this incidence to customs officer regarding the missing of my suitcase but till now i didn't receive any response from them.
My suitcase is very large, dark brown in color made up of leather. The brand name of the suitcase is VIP and it has a handle to pull and wheels at its base. As I have finished my post graduation i am leaving to my home town so I packed alI my text books, certificates, CDs, laptop, credit card, clothes and some miscellaneous things.
I would like to appreciate you if you take necessary steps to relocate my lost suitcase.I have arranged courier service too. Asap you find my suitcase please send it to me at plot no:53, Nagole, Hyderabad. Pincode :500068. Looking forward for your reply.
Yours faithfully,
priya.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam, I was one of the passenger who took flig...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d on march 25 at 3.00 pm. unfortunately i did not receive my suitcase on that day...
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Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...id not receive my suitcase on that day. so i have been complained about this incid...
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Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e missing of my suitcase but till now i didnt receive any response from them. My ...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: brown
...em. My suitcase is very large, dark brown in color made up of leather. The brand name of t...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... As I have finished my post graduation i am leaving to my home town so I packed ...
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Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... clothes and some miscellaneous things. I would like to appreciate you if you ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...sary steps to relocate my lost suitcase.I have arranged courier service too. Asap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67417628829 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.738095238095 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3104412212 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168300721102 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062929767072 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324535406317 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108152992139 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402837091575 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.