Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
There are many examples in history where native region personal plays major part to built economy, country or winning peoples heart. Some people think that metropolitan city have rapid result for success in career. Other thinks Its nothing to do with major city or regions, Every person work themselves towards the success. I personally believe success stories has nothing to do about regions its about a person ability and will to work things out.
There are many examples of person who cross their limits of will power and committed what they are doing. People like Abdul Sattar Edhi a famous philanthropist, he was not a rich man, business tycoon or estate magnate. He was a simple man who work with his passion to help others. I don't know what to say him because he own many estate in Pakistan for welfare and worlds largest welfare ambulance service but he still poor and have no money for himself.
As There are many other examples like Mir Muhammad Talpur the king of heart and land of Sindh. he send 21,000 people to study abroad. Some become Doctor, Lawyer, Engineers, Lecturer and other professional gem. But history will no remember Talpur which region is he from but what he did to his people.
As I said before region or state does not accomplish success but people struggle and will power make then remember in this life or after life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...stories has nothing to do about regions its about a person ability and will to work...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...work with his passion to help others. I dont know what to say him because he own man...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[1]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
...ion to help others. I dont know what to say him because he own many estate in Pakis...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun estate seems to be countable; consider using: 'many estates'.
Suggestion: many estates
...ont know what to say him because he own many estate in Pakistan for welfare and worlds larg...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...many estate in Pakistan for welfare and worlds largest welfare ambulance service but he still ...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ur the king of heart and land of Sindh. he send 21,000 people to study abroad. Som...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sends'.
Suggestion: sends
...the king of heart and land of Sindh. he send 21,000 people to study abroad. Some bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76694915254 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26695707269 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618644067797 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1704741228 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281320572654 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917136718198 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767342145858 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160059317041 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851286199446 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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