People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
A glance at working regulary in a certain occupation brings a light question that has several times provoked discussions, that is, whether earning salary is all about profession or if there is something else. Some people might contend that money is the soely crucial and only key for keeping a reluctant job. However, I would like to suggest that there is some other factors that make people work, in terms of daily rythm and social relationship. In the ensuing pargraphs, I will try to shed some light on this point of view through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mentioned firstly is that the regular daily cycle that derives from a normal job sustains one's stability toward general life rythm. My personal working experience will provide with some good demonstration. For around few months after graduating university, I did not engaged myself to any kind of activity. My day and night was shifted due to the irregular habbit of sleeping. I got out of this bad cycle by getting a part time job, which made me to wake up in 8am at least 3 times a week. With doing this job, I feel livelier and happier.
Another point to be mentioned is that job occupation ables people to sustain their physical health, as well as their mental condition as known in general already. There is a study that proves this standpoint. The federal government of social life maintenance US investigated two groups of people over age of 50 on the relationship between their CRP rate and the number of people they are actively interacting with. The result showed that the more friends the people had, the less CRP rate, which is the cancer possibility rate, they had.
Although the above mentioned cross the mind at a first sight, it does not mean that they are the only one. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. It should be noted that the satisfaction people get from their profession is truely an important reason to keep a job. To be specific, people would be challenged when faced with difficulties, and will try to set goals of overcoming it and act accordingly. When they finally get success with what they desired, their self esteem will get higher and as a result their efficiency in their profession will become stable and better.
Due to the foregoing grouds, I firmly believe that there are other kinds of reasons to keep a job, apart from making money out of it. And maintaning a regular life cycle and a physical health are two prime and momentous reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...that derives from a normal job sustains ones stability toward general life rythm. My...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'engage'
Suggestion: engage
... after graduating university, I did not engaged myself to any kind of activity. My day ...
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Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... got out of this bad cycle by getting a part time job, which made me to wake up in 8am at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, apart from, at least, i feel, in general, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73576309795 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55997532691 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555808656036 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3799815958 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90476190476 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194762481725 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052578472773 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461510793659 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105809160949 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516761047057 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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