The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
The given table illustrates how many coffee, tea, pastries and sandwiches were sold by a coffee shop on a regular office day.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that most consumer bought food and drinks in the morning between 7.30 and 10.30 and in the evening between 5.30 and 8.30. Coffee was the best-selling on this list, whereas tea was the worst selling among these products.
Now turning to the details, coffee was the most popular drinks with 265 cups of it sold between 7.30 and 10.30 , after that time the coffee consumption declined slightly to 185 between 10.30 and 2.30 and to 145 between 2.30 and 5.30. In the evening, between 5.30 and 8.30 the demand of coffee went up to 200. Tea sales had a similar pattern to that of coffee, they stood at 110 in the morning, less than half of the coffee sales in the same period, decreased to 35 between 2.30 and 5.30 and almost doubled between 5.30 to 8.30.
On the other hand, pastries had a fluctuated trend. The figure for pastries started at 275 in the morning, after declined to 95, the figure reached the peak of 150 between 2.30 and 5.30. Moreover, sandwiches sales are similar in the period of 7.30 - 10.30 and 8.30-5.30, 50 and 40 respectively. The coffee shop sold 200 sandwiches between 10.30 and 2.30, almost two times the sales in the evening.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun coffee seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much coffee', 'a good deal of coffee'.
Suggestion: much coffee; a good deal of coffee
The given table illustrates how many coffee, tea, pastries and sandwiches were sold...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ks with 265 cups of it sold between 7.30 and 10.30 , after that time the coffee c...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... cups of it sold between 7.30 and 10.30 , after that time the coffee consumption ...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., after that time the coffee consumption declined slightly to 185 between 10.30 a...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n 10.30 and 2.30 and to 145 between 2.30 and 5.30. In the evening, between 5.30 a...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f coffee went up to 200. Tea sales had a similar pattern to that of coffee, they ...
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Line 6, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver, sandwiches sales are similar in the period of 7.30 - 10.30 and 8.30-5.30, 50...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60683760684 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28744496797 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0900169371 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814503500411 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512474238022 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053516206808 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773887125249 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560942417041 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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