The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given maps illustrate the future plans and various advancement of the small city called Islips, as well as the current state of a town.
Overall, it can be seen that the city centre will undergo alterations wich comprises the construction of a dual carriage away around the city centre wich can connect the school with the city centre and its facilities. The city centre will also be renovated with new services.
According to the current state of the city, the main area of the city is sourrended by the shops, countryside and housing estate. Between the two shops there is the main road and a big park in the north east.
Looking more closely at the map predicting the future development of the city, a lot of modification can be observed. There will be an increase in the size of the city centre, therefore the countryside will disappear. The single road were will be replaced with a dual carriage, and there will be built a pedestrian area in the central area of the city. There were be constructed new houses and the shops and the countryside were will be replaced with a new shopping centre, a car park and a bus station.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the main area of the city is sourrended by the shops, countryside and housing es...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erefore the countryside will disappear. The single road were will be replaced wi...
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Message: Did you mean 'where will'?
Suggestion: where will
...yside will disappear. The single road were will be replaced with a dual carriage, and t...
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Suggestion: been
...he central area of the city. There were be constructed new houses and the shops an...
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Line 6, column 427, Rule ID: WERE_MD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where will'?
Suggestion: where will
...ouses and the shops and the countryside were will be replaced with a new shopping centre,...
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Line 6, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d with a new shopping centre, a car park and a bus station.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5902244188 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4792415348 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.080519322276 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401595492632 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468948447069 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705894109861 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054654607006 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.