Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, environmental issues have become too complicated. Therefore, an international collaboration is needed to tackle this vital issue that affects every living creature on our planet, because the effort that has been made by many organizations and societies is considered to be insufficient and ineffective.
Many of these environmental distributions affect us on a daily basis. For example, global warming that is caused by the constant and unprecedented increase of carbon dioxide gas in the atmosphere, which has resulted in a persistent increase of the earth’s temperature. Hence, climate change has become an obvious phenomenon all over the globe. Many consequences have taken place such as raising level of seashores in many countries, melting of icebergs in the poles, droughts and famines.
Onather crucial environmental problem is pollution of the oceans by plastic trash and ships’ remnants that has resulted in death and extinction of many sea creatures that ate or influenced by the invasion of the trash to their natural environment. Also, there are many concerns about overfishing and it’s impact on the marine life, particularly ; after a great deal of decreasing in numbers of many kinds of fish has been observed.
In the last two centuries, Industrial and technological revolutions have been one of the main factors in increasing pollution that has led to major imbalance of the ecosystem of our marvellous planet. In my opinion, a strong and immediate international association is required, in order to come up with practical solutions and set up effective regulations that should help in reducing all form of pollution. Moreover, raising awareness campaigns must be established worldwide to inform people about the importance of regaining the balance of our planet’s ecosystem and make the earth a better place to live on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 26.3917525773 193% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 937.175257732 171% => OK
No of words: 292.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47602739726 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25421923148 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 290.88556701 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.307074277 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.363636364 76.5299724578 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0858354187058 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318233135976 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277066807713 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522852455246 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241848858704 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 8.37731958763 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 70.7449484536 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 8.71597938144 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 7.59969072165 137% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 41.2886597938 247% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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