The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one-third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over.
What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?
Nowadays, the proportion of birth in developed countries is being a low degree, and it is certain to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030, the quantity of the population aged 65 and over is estimated to be one-third of the population in most developed countries. These things are likely to make some issues of social life.
The first case for that is the human resource. On the one hand, it seems like that fewer people will be working because of the rise of retired people, and therefore fewer people will be paying income tax. This leads to decrease the budget of each country. On the other hand, lacking old-hand people will also be a primary concern when such characteristic jobs as the lawyer, doctor, engineer, etc. need specific qualifications and experiences.
Moreover, this also means that the countries will significantly lack young human resource. The young generation those who are enthusiastic, active, brilliant, creative, much ambitious will be looked forward to growing the country up. They are prime successors to carry out that mission. Hence if lacking them, the economy is likely to decline the activeness and be gradually deteriorated.
To handle this circumstance, the government of the developed countries needs to conduct effective policies relating to the issue of retirement and birth. To illustrate for this, probably considering an archetypal example such as: increase the official retirement age to 70 or older. As we know the health of people now and in the future is more and more superior before because the strong growth of the technology, science, medical modernly makes our quality of life better. Thus, the solution completely is able to be conducted.
In principal, all the predictions may entirely occur in the future in developed countries, if they have no appropriate policies as well as methods to manage this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, third, thus, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12745098039 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85004232484 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8391190855 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2941176471 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342693534803 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869424522583 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123468348437 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175704758974 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16605082951 0.056905535591 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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