Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is widely held a belief that society should enhance sport centers in order to develop nation's health, but there are strong counter arguments by a section of people who think that sport has not tremendous effect and other projects are necessary. I am of the opinion that this matter should be debated in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be drawn.
Laying emphasis on my vantage point, sport and health are intertwined. The primary reason we have to take into consideration that the sport is the cheapest method that provides a healthy lifestyle. For example, a state can build football stadiums, tracks and cycling roads with a minor budget. Apart from that, sport facilities are able to cover more people since the gym's capacity can accept huge society members. More importantly, the sport is the preventive aid that precludes an overweight ailment, heart diseases, and diabetes.
One the other hand, sport cannot prevail all health problems. Hence government should set up other programs that ensure a healthy lifestyle. For example, people have to choose proper meal habitats. Society members should intake salty, sugary and fatty meals in modest and cut off junk foods such as cake, cheeseburger. The authority must educate its population to right meal consuming in order to create strong and longevity nation.
In conclusion, although there are a number of different points of view regarding this issue, I claim that sport is the best way to solve and prevent health matters. Therefore, the government would be well-advised to spend more money on sports facilities and propagandize the sports benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gyms'' or 'gym's'?
Suggestion: gyms'; gym's
...are able to cover more people since the gyms capacity can accept huge society member...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ort cannot prevail all health problems. Hence government should set up other programs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15413533835 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61063903034 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5703878061 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182697984401 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601554492797 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559543494823 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113648856858 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420657531342 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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