TPO 17 Independant
Advertisement is one of the best means of promoting product sales. Whether most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are or not, has generated a lot of controversy lately. As far as I am concerned, they exagerate on how good a product is most of the time. In the following paragraphs, I will make my points to support my opinion.
First and foremost, producer companies just want to sell their products, by any means necessary, therefore, they may use some unethical ways. In this regard, most advertisements are flashy and confusing. That is, they make a viewer believe that they need the product, whereas they may not. Furthermore, they use some gimmicks to lure specific groups of people, such as geeks. For example, mobile phone companies introduce their new flag-ship products with too many unuseful features, that are barely used, in order to persuade technology lovers to buy them.
Moreover, another important aspect is the fact that numerous advertisements focus on young children. Small children mostly lack the ability to discriminate genuine claims from fake ones. Consequently, they cannot decide whether a toy will be interesting to them in the future or not, they just decide to buy it at the moment. Also, advertisements use fantasy, which is appealing to young children, to produce an effect with which they can sell their products. For instance, a company producing toy robots may demonstrate that the robot can fly in the space, while in reality it is just an ordinary robot. Young children may have difficulty to decide whether the robot has this ability or not.
Admittedly, not to mention the importance of trends in advertising would be an oversight. Today some matters become trending from time to time. Accordingly, advertisers make use of this trend and promote their products. For example, if a specific color is trending, a company may produce its products with that color for a short amount of time, thus, people would not think of its usage, and only decide to buy it since its color is trending.
All in all, advertisements use various methods to show their product better than they really are. They may lie, take advantage of young children's judgment, or make use of everyday trends.
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| 2023-05-10 | sonyeoso | 73 | view |
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- TPO 26 76
- It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city Do you agree or disagree 87
- TPO 21 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well. 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02673796791 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79126968949 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553475935829 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.096369239 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5238095238 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.19047619048 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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