Essay topics: the table below describes victims by age group and offence category in Venezuela,1999.
The table compares the number of Venezualian victims of different offence categories who belonged to 5 age groups in 1999. Overall, the highest number was for people robbed at 9680, followed by that of kidnapping representing the rate of 233. The next positions belonged to the figure for blackmail and murder’s victims, at 223 and 162, respectively. The number of people neglected stood last at 54. Moreover, the number of victims coming from the oldest age group was the lowest.
With regard to the number of the Venezuelan murdered, the figure of 25-44 years old citizens was highest at 72, meanwhile, that of who aging 0- 14 and 65 or over was lowest, ranging from 13 to 14 people. However, the 0- 14 years old was neglected and kidnapped mostly, at 39 for the former and 110 for the latter. It is interesting that no one from the 25- 44 age group was the victim of negligence. While youngsters whose age was from 15 to 24 were the mostly robbed figures, there were 89 victims belonging to the 25- 44 age group being blackmailed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, while, as for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65591397849 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67318402327 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7401221914 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178377231497 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861332348033 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120924768173 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150067192704 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422537155746 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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