You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mr. Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.
Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience necessary.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Mr. Moore,
Re: Waitress position
I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details of my previous experience and qualifications.
Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, my personality is well suited to working as a waitress. I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages. In my last waitress job, I had over a dozen repeat customers each day. And, the fast-paced environment of wait...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 176 200
No. of Characters: 827 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.642 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.699 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.963 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.651 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.627 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4