the relation with people is the best way for a successful future job or studying hard.
For success in the future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Some people think that the relation between people and each others is the gate way for success. People believe that by improving the relation ship between each other they will be able to suucssed in their job. Although I understand their pint of view I have a different opinion. I believe that studing hard in school is the essential way for success. The basis of my opinion is educational, social, and personal.
From the education perspective, people in school will be able to learn more. As the people learn as they become more knowledgeable. People who have more information are those are more successful in their career. For instance if you own your own business and you have many relations with people, but unfortunately you are lacking of information and knowledge, your business will not proceed well. On the other hand, if someone has his own business and in the mean time they have been graduated with high degree from college or school, that person can manage their work good. This person will have the ability to manage the business from the financial situation and also he can leads the work in a proper way. Education is the perfect way to continue a have successful future job.
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Socially, in college and university people are able to communicate and increase their social net work easily. College and university is the perfect place for all students to talk and and communicate. For instance, univeristies will provides the opportunity for all people to to get long with each others, when students are working on the same project they will have the chance to talk with each others, further more some professor requested students to do some presentation in front of the class, that allow stusents to get rid from their stress and shynes. All those challnges that students faced in the university allow them for a better future. Schools, college and univeristies is the only gruantee to have a better relationship with peole and consequently provides us with a successful job.
In conclusion, for the reason I mentioned before, I encourage every one to study hard in school. School an d collge will provide the chance for better success. In Schools and colloge we will gain more information that help us being more successful. School and college increase our social net work and consequently we wil be able to deal with many kinds of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... will be able to suucssed in their job. Although I understand their pint of view I have ...
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...ational, social, and personal. From the education perspective, people in sch...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...the financial situation and also he can leads the work in a proper way. Education is ...
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Line 6, column 695, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ituation and also he can leads the work in a proper way. Education is the perfect way to contin...
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Line 14, column 229, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to be' or 'be'.
Suggestion: to be; be
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89858490566 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62594703966 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455188679245 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9055992839 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4090909091 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353229274771 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118082669167 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119563796581 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252014778326 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129168790029 0.0645574589148 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.