Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people move freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that cheap air flight give them more chances to go wherever they want but other say that it can lead to some serious environment problems. I believe that even though people can benefit a lot from cheap air flight, the disadvantages that it brings about outweigh its advantages.
First of all, it is true to say that cheap airline allows people to move more freely than ever before. People who have low budget now have more choices for transporting. In the past, if they wanted to travel for a long way, they would go by train and car. Besides, with people who usually travel in air, cheap air flight can save a huge amount of money for them, which allows them to discover new places. The increasing number of Vietnamese students visiting to foreign countries such as Thailand, Cambodia, Malaysia or even Singapore in the recent year can be a specific example. Moreover, the decreasing budget for travelling can open the new door for investment and co operating with global business.
However, what the cheap airline brings about cannot compensation for the problems it causes to environment and society. Firstly, cheap air flight means more and more planes will fly than usual, which leads to the air pollution. The emission from one plane can be equivalent to the amount of carbon dioxide that thousands of cars discharge to the environment. This not only degrades the air quality but also negatively contribute to global warming. Apart from air pollution, low – price air flight can cause the noise pollution. Jet engines generating extravagantly loud noise can be detrimental to people living near the airports. It is noted that the number of people with health problems such as: hearing loss, hypertension has been lifting dramatically.
All in all, even though cheap air flight can meet some short – term needs of people, in long term, its affect to environment must be considered seriously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93827160494 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59366526898 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9301269626 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330558883973 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107046159694 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967253450991 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224493411631 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105174496577 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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