Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The notion that young people do not give enough time to helping their communities is a fascinating one and one that I believe in. Young people are so engrossed in technology, education, and work, that they do not have enough time to consider helping their communities.
First and foremost, young people are so gripped by the technological advancements that they barely have a time to consider their communities' problems. They are engaged with buying and using new high-tech devices and gadgets. Furthermore, the Internet contributes to overlooking local problems. In this respect, most of the young people are concerned with foreign affairs, and problems of hapless countries in deprived regions of the world. Although it is important to care about people of the world, considering local people's problems is of utmost priority.
Moreover, another aspect of young people's lives today, is that their education occupies most of their time. Education is becoming more competitive every year, providing that population growth is not proportional to available educational facilities in most of the countries. Therefore, there are not adequate opportunities to include every person, and people compete excessively to obtain opportunity of further education. Furthermore, with scientific advancements, educational materials are becoming more and more demanding. As a result, young people should spend a great deal of their time to fully comprehend the matter. Eventually, there would be little time left for other activities. Young people would probably prefer to spend this little and rare time with their family and friends.
Admiteddly, not to mention the effects of mechanical life in the cities would be an oversight. Fast-paced life in today's cities compells young people to work hard in order to be able to keep up with others and succeed in their career. Also, people might want to spend some time to excersie in order to alleviate the negative effects of hustles and bustles of citylife on their mental and physicall health. For this reason, young people merely have time to be consered about problems of their own rather than that of the society.
All in all, young people do not give enough time to helping their communities, because they do not have the time to do so, because they spend most their time on work, education, and technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24933687003 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8029266956 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485411140584 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6672348842 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.157894737 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300288990574 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997705270025 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912088554825 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207273800178 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950604069334 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.