Some people think that it is not necessary to go to other countries to study other culture. We can learn from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?
Culture is an compelling topic that many people care about. Some claims that with the significant growth of the internet, films and books, we do not need to travel to other countries in a bid to learn about different culture anymore. Personally, I disagree with this opinion.
Today, people have loads of opportunities to broaden their knowledge about other countries through reading books, watching films or searching on the internet. These activities can help people easily find out information about other countries’s culture such as what people in foreign countries eat or how they celebrate their festivals and other interesting things. In addition, learning from books, films and the internet is a good way for people who do not have time or money to go and experience in abroad nation.
However, learning other countries’s culture from books, films and the internet has some drawbacks. Firstly, people may have incorrect information about a culture. Content of some books and films are exagerrated, so facts that they provide are wrong and impractical. Moreover, there are a great number of information on the internet and not all of them are true, so this may make people feel ambivalent and are belied about a culture. Secondly, people may not remember information after reading books, watching films or searching on the internet. When people learn something, they need to have real experience because it is a great way to remember what they did read. Thus, if they just get information from books or the internet and do not go out and experience by themselves then they may forger what they did learn someday.
In conclusion, I firmly hold the view that learning from books, films and the internet is not adequate, people should travel to know about other countries’s culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Culture is an compelling topic that many people care ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12542372881 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84524530684 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481355932203 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1986217942 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420219085981 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163055059615 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110510144189 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296495940996 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392203972836 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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