People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health?
Nowadays human-beings are paying more attention to their health conditions and they use various things to stay healthy. Some people prefer to go to live in the countryside in order to be far away from cities' pollution while others take daily tablets and medicine to achieve to the purpose of healthful lives. In my viewpoint, however, I have ideas that are different from others and I will explain them is the following paragraphs.
First and foremost thing that I do every day for being healthy is exercising. In fact, the exercising is one of main part of my day-to-day tasks. I always go cycling with my friends in my leisure times. I ride my bicycle to the nearest library in my neighborhood, which is to study for TOEFL test. Additionally, sometimes my friends go to sport areas in the downtown, which is big and also invite me to come and play with them. Not only playing soccer, but also I go to gymnastic and use instruments such as treadmill in order to burn calories and fats so that I could stay healthy, since doctors recommend to people to exercise and prevent from obesity and deter getting diseases such as heart attaching. So, as you can see, doing exercises daily is one of my procedure to stay physically healthful.
Secondly, eating and drinking healthy things is my another method to become healthy. By eating low fat as well as low sugar meals, in fact, I decrease the risks of getting ailments such as obesity and diabetics, which is nowadays common illness among human-being, as the doctors warn people from these diseases. Moreover, I hardly ever consume processed foods that are stored in cans, since in the preparation of these foods some of unhealthy material such as acid citric is used to make the foods long-lasting features. Furthermore, drinking soda and some of other alcoholic drinking is also cause some sort of illness, which is really sometimes deadly. For instance, by drinking non-alcohol things including fruit juice or green tea, one will be stay healthy and prevent from getting cancer diseases while alcoholic drinks could cause that kind of lethal illness.
Taking into consideration the above-mentioned tasks I would say that I 'm healthy because of devoting my time regularly in exercising and because of eating and drinking healthful things. So, if someone like to stay healthful, I will recommend him or her to follow my procedures.
- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task A little over 2,200 years ago, the Roman navy attacked the Greek port city of Syracuse. According to some ancient historians, the Greeks defended themselves with an ingenious weapon called a "burning mirror": a polished co 93
- TPO-4 3
- TPO-10 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 88
- In future students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying traditional schools Which would you prefer Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice 89
- TPO-18: students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plain them is the following paragraphs. First and foremost thing that I do every...
^^^^
Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'caused'.
Suggestion: caused
...ome of other alcoholic drinking is also cause some sort of illness, which is really s...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in fact, kind of, sort of, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74517048315 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8033675513 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.470588235 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166111767079 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055857026262 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662732587805 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906969824773 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447885746147 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.