The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants for our planet and give the solution.
In the competitive world and era, there is an ongoing debate about issues that the world’s governments and organizations are faced; however, in my view, the most pressing problem for individuals in the world is global warming. Therefore, in this essay, I intend to explore the sources of his problem along with some possible solutions to it.
To commence with, the reasons for this are many and various, but it seems to me that chief problem among these is global warming. To cite an example, it is responsible for increasing the temprature of our planet, which, in turn, results in rising sea levels. Additionally, unable to curb this harsh condition, we can expect more extreme weather , and that flooding and droughts may become more common than in earlier times. Thus, this makes it clear that why it should be controlled in order to protect the dewellers for our planet.
However, in order to stem the tide of this problem, In my opinion, we must first address its roots causes and some measures need to be taken. Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for authorities to impose more stricter rules as introduce laws to limit emissions from factories, and impose “green taxes” on drivers and airlines companies. Hence, I would content that such measurements play a vital role to survive the earth.
To recapitulate, my sentiment is that had we made more contribution to the development of our environment, we would have been able to tackle such major and serious problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00393700787 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77389933005 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0009782505 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.1 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240897617296 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862948872671 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856772904511 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131030573574 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798269424735 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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