The civic centre will be planned to changr. there are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for now
The picture illustrate the alterations that may take place at the civic centre.
It is clear that all facilities will be changed in position, with exceptions for the library, the concert hall and the shopping center. The theater, the hotel & restaurant and the open park are three new facilities which will be added into the civic center area.
The concert hall and the shopping center are two areas that will be remained unchanged in size and position. The library will be totally destroyed and will not be reconstructed. The exhibition hall will be built at the place where the library used to be and it will be decreased in size. Besides, there is an increase in size of the council office, which will replace the old exhibition hall.
The car park will be converted to the theater and the hotel & restaurant. The theater will locate to the left of the concert hall and in the corner, while the hotel & restaurant will situate to the right of the concert hall, right beside the shopping center. Open park and underground car park will be erected between the council office and the exhibition hall.
- Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages 71
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- THE CHARTS GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT TWO GENRES OF tv PROGRAMMES WATCHED BY MEN AND WOMEN AND FOUR DIFFERENT AGE GROUPS IN AUSTRALIA. 46
- Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- the chart below shows the amount of energy consumed in 3 countries in the year 2000 and the rate of increase in energy consumption as compared with the year 1999 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The picture illustrate the alterations that may take place at ...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: unchanged
...ter are two areas that will be remained unchanged in size and position. The library will be total...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...emained unchanged in size and position. The library will be totally destroyed and w...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...estroyed and will not be reconstructed. The exhibition hall will be built at the pl...
^^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hibition hall will be built at the place where the library used to be and it will...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, may, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77486910995 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48868200094 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460732984293 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4698321523 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188702846271 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982407803714 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464611656218 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116169073535 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521428690135 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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