Essay topics:
do you enjoy warmer places or cooler ones?
In my view, colder places are more appealing than warmer ones for two reasons.
First, it is more relaxing for example; after the daily activity , when you received to the hotel, you have the opportunity to pick a book and lay down under a warm blanket in order to start a journey in the novel atmosphere. Second, I have a kind of allergy to the warm weather caused by small suspended particle in the air, which lead to a breath barrier issue for me.
That's why I prefer colder places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng for example; after the daily activity , when you received to the hotel, you hav...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ead to a breath barrier issue for me. Thats why I prefer colder places.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, for example, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 397.0 1615.20841683 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 90.0 315.596192385 29% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41111111111 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.08007028824 4.20363070211 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31990489043 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 176.041082164 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.744444444444 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 126.0 506.74238477 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3429333107 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130784832819 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689222656563 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814905563161 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849674509292 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839906152317 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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