You have long been friends with someone. If they do something that you don’t like, should you still be friends with him or her?
Throughout history, friendship has always been cited as an outstanding principle in human’s behavior and social relationships. Due to its paramount importance, sociologists have always tried to examine relationships between friends and yet they haven’t been able to find an answer to questions such as, if a long term friend does something wrong, whether she or he should be forgiven or not. From my vantage point, being friends with someone for a long time is really precious and one shouldn’t leave this friendship easily. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
The first reason that I like to mention is that having a long term friendship helps you to improve your social skills. It is obvious that all the people who have long-term friendship, whether they are introverted or extroverted, are better skilled in social behaviors and can socialize with other people in a very much easier way. A recent study in Faculty of Sociology in University of Tehran reveals that people who have one or more long term friend have 60% more chance to socialize in small communities than people with no long term friends.
Furthermore, it is an indisputable fact that friends and specifically long term/old friends can help each other in tough spots. When you have a long term friend, you can always count on her or him in difficult situations and you are confident that your friend will try as hard as possible to help you cope with that difficult situation. There is a famous quote which says “Friends are the family we choose.” It means that good friends are like family to us and we can count on them in tough spots. As a case in point, last year, I had some financial problems and if my friends had not helped me, I would have not known what to do.
Finally, the most prominent point to be noted is that forgiving is a moral virtue which has been acclaimed in almost every nation and culture. When you forgive your long term friend, you give your friend a new chance and it is advantageous for both you and your friend. Forgiveness has been praised in every culture and religion which demonstrates its importance from a very long time ago, As Sadi, a celebrated Persian poet, says “Forgiveness is the greatest moral virtue.”
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that long term friendship is really precious and if a long term friend do something that you don’t like, you should still be friends with her or him. As mentioned before, long term friendship improves your social skills, helps you in tough spots, and helps you gain moral virtues. Thus, I believe that everyone should have a few long term friends and she or he shouldn’t end these long term friendships very easily.
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- tpo1-integrated-writing 3
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- tpo25-integrated writing 83
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, really, so, still, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87578947368 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85528794556 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490526315789 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7237569172 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.75 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6875 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502119005495 0.236089414692 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168031677674 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123138804172 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300146564279 0.150856017488 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953647340237 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.