You have long been friend with someone. If they do something that you don’t like, should you still be friends with him or her?
It is indisputable that the friend plays an important role in our daily life. Today, a heated debate on whether one should disconnect the relationship if a friend makes a terrible mistake. The answer differs considerably from individual to individual. As far as I am concerned, the connection between friends should not be cut off just by one flaw in their behavior. My argument for these points is listed as follows.
To start with, as a human being, it is almost unlikely to possess a friendship without any conflict and argument. But the key point to maintain a long relationship is how one makes up when making mistakes. Take my own experience for an example, once in class, my friend Tom took my equipment and tools for drawing without my permission. Because of this reason, I spent the whole afternoon searching for my missing properties and could not work on my drawing project. After the whole day, he eventually came to me and returned my tools and as you might expect, I did not want to speak one word to him. Under this circumstance, he approached to me apologizing and brought one of my favorite drinks for forgiveness. Thus, after I saw his effort on reclaiming our relationship, I accepted him.
In addition, standing as a friend's perspective, we can express our real emotion if they make mistakes. If we choose to accept their apology without telling them on how we feel about the certain issue, it is likely that they will repeat making the same flaw over and over again. To illustrate, back in the days when I was in the basketball team, one of my teammates have a bad habit of drinking other water without asking. So one day I came to him and told him that his behavior is unacceptable and if he is unwilling to change, he will gradually lose more friends. And from that day on, he really altered his action and ask for permission before drinking.
Admittedly, everything has two sides and some affairs might be way too far over one's limitation. For instance, as for me, I simply could not accept anyone to criticize my family member. Moreover, I can not accept any excuse or reason even if it is only a joke. However, as friends been with each other for a long time, we all know one's limitation and would try our best to prevent these problems or topics to occur.
All in all, taking into account of these factors, if the issue is in an acceptable range, we should accept their apology and forgive their mistakes so the friendship can last in the long run. That is not to say that other opinions are totally out of merits. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that my points of view are fully capable of firmly supporting my position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'friends'' or 'friend's'?
Suggestion: friends'; friend's
...pted him. In addition, standing as a friends perspective, we can express our real em...
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Line 7, column 332, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...each other for a long time, we all know ones limitation and would try our best to pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, thus, as for, for instance, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61603375527 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69054099435 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554852320675 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7565940986 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136377395153 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351164086528 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373272025529 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749889529671 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293977315992 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.