Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Educational institutes impart education and knowledge.
A student should be allowed to pursue any field of their choice.
All educational institutes have a certain grading mechanism. It provides feedback and review. If a student
fails to pass the minimum criteria then he or she is not given the pass certificate.
But students should be allowed to choose and study whichever field that interests them.
The grading mechanism clearly reflects the students aptitude in the particular subject .
If the low grades do not deter the student and he wants to still pursue the course , educational
institutes should help the student .
Success has always been subjective.whether the student is likely to succeed or not depends on the pursuit
of the student after course completion. The educational institutes have a responsibility to help
all students equally to gain knowledge and learn practical applications of the same .
A student who was pursuing a course in cooking suffered from Anosmia. It is a condition where by she
could not smell. The cooking institute rejected her application. But she did not give up on her dream and
learnt cooking from several online resources. She mastered cooking using a combination of all
the other senses. She focused on the taste and texture of the dish and was able to open a restaurant of her own.
this example shows that a person who is unlikely to succeed can also succeed , as they say where there is a
will there is always a way .When joining the course this girl simply wanted to follow her passion for cooking
and learn from the best resources. Success for her at that point was to be able to learn and complete classes
like other people . But with her determination , success had a different meaning for her later .
To be able to successfully use her talent and serve great food with her signature .had she been accepted
at the university she may not have this route , Thus success is very subjective and can change over time
thus it is difficult to assess individuals potential on likelihood for success by educational institutes.
Not all students know their true calling. Some student may dislike physics but have an interest in aerospace and flying objects
Physics is an integral part of this system . The student has to realize and work through the mundane or some
topics that he does not like but which are important.
In such cases institutes should help student that care about their results
instead of simply dissuading them . Hard work can help achieve wonders. Even if a student is poor in
mathematics, with grit and determination he can surely improve .
But if the institute dissuades the student ,he may never even have a chance to discover his true abilities.
multiple failures act as the steps on the stairway called success.
In case there are problems which cannot be resolved then educational institutes can make the student aware
of the impending challenges.Like for training to be a pilot , it is important to have good eyesight i.e. some minimum criteria for
vision is specified .
Thus for a student that some how hampers vision required for practical tests should be made aware of the situation.
In such a case it is the responsibility of the institute.
Similarly for joining the army a minimum amount of physical fitness is necessary. A student who may be suffering
from a chronic disease can be dissuaded . When practical problems limit the student ,this approach can
be applied , otherwise educational institutes should leave it to the student.
The educational institutes can start a counselling center where students can discuss their
issues and get a feedback . This can help them review the courses and check how it helps them achieve their
current goals. This analysis to explore potential will be more useful than a dissuading mechanism .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, still, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3238.0 2235.4752809 145% => OK
No of words: 635.0 442.535393258 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09921259843 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01988110783 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80724198915 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461417322835 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 990.9 704.065955056 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.0463546346 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5135135135 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1621621622 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.59459459459 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 41.0 4.97078651685 825% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 52.0 7.80617977528 666% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205474891303 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535556965434 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435680518185 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552978892583 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472596747199 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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