Topic: Some people prefer to live in the country. Others prefer to live in the town or big cities.
In the contemporary by enhancing technology and increasing population, people like to inhabit in the cities instead of the country, for. Three mainly case about this choice, for instance healthy, education, and quality of life.
In these cities today by developing technology humans heed high quality of life such as high speed internet, quickly transportation and large shopping center. Quickly internet mainly role in the best communication and easily transfer information between people. Modern shopping center in cities provide various electronic product, appliances, clothes and anything do you think; however, in the country marketplace only provide agriculture crop and initial instrument for primary needs, nor prepare advanced device. Not only is high quality transportation useful for high speed transportation, but it provides various models of transportation as well.
Another privilege in the city has to do with the general health. Today people easily access to very facility for example professional doctors, who distinguish perfectly disease and illness, provide best drug and cure methods for patients. In spite of fresh air and water in village, people’s in the country encounter medicine’s equipment shortage such as high technology hospital and pharmacy. Without any healthy program in the country threat life people in high level of variety illness such as born abnormal children, plague spread throughout village, and diseases arise by a contaminate water.
Increase education for child and young people cause decent crime and violent act in society and enhancing morality and loyalty in community. Accordingly, state-of-the-art school and university by appropriate education provide peace society and respectful people as well as lower prisoners in jails. Nonetheless, lack education facilities in the country and deficiency expert teachers reason increase poor and disrespect people. Better education is an effective way to recognizing children talents, for by correct distinguish and nurture everyone talents can do best performance in theirs work. On the other hand, children talents in the country spoil with shortage facility.
In summary, with all of reasons this account, I prefer live in the city rather than the country. Live in city the best choice for you have the best technology and high healthy and good education facility. Who can ignore live in the city better in the country?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... diseases arise by a contaminate water. Increase education for child and young p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...live in the city better in the country?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62670299728 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95383180273 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574931880109 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6452261244 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.722222222 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103451760044 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374718782763 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557330931662 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681607922863 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720687449301 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.