Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Should states’ money be spent on railways rather than on roads? My answer on this question with some limitation is yes. Below my stance and reasons on which it is based will be discussed in details.
On the one hand, when we speak about significant distances, spending finances on railways seems to be reasonable. In general this kind to transportation is more environmentally friendly and less disruptive for wildlife because trains causes less noise and air pollution. For instance, those trains that are powered by electricity will not emit CO2 or any other chemical elements that cause the gl...
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Essay evaluation report
on local roads that situated in urban areas.
on local roads that are situated in urban areas.
on local roads situated in urban areas.
Finally, in my opinion,
In my opinion, //don't need 'Finally'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1727 1500
No. of Different Words: 211 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.109 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.789 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.068 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.27 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.472 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in general, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31065088757 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95453717879 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2831796812 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2777777778 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127192201082 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396663323089 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05510208297 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884066740113 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531352120339 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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