TODAY MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE TRAVELLING THAN EVER BEFORE.
WHY IS THE CASE?
WHAT ARE THE BENEFITS OF TRAVELLING FOR THE TRAVELLER?
With the advent of modern technologies, countries are building and beautifying their cities to attract tourists. It is true that in comparison to the past, currently, across the world, there is a tremendous growth in tourism. Several countries and places which used to be remote, now with the adventure mind bent of people now becoming popular destinations of people. This definetly is boosting the economy of all the major countries like America, United Kindom, India etc.
It is true that nowadays most of people across the globe wants to travel and expore various places and continents. There are several reasons for the this. To begin with, people working in multinational companies often have requirements to travel overseas for their projects and conduct business meetings or deals. Also, people are getting long time overseas jobs where they get excellent renumeration packages and this gives them opportunity to spend money in travel and other fun related activities. Secondly, these days because of high competition, filght rates have come reduced which is helping people to plan freequent holiday vacations and travel to their desired places. More importanatly, atleast in my country , India, with the introduction of westurn culture and working with overseas clients, the awareness and desire to take a break from stressful life is breatifully instilled in their mind.
However, travelling has benefited several stake holders. To start with, travelling to various places and nations, gives an opportunity to tourist to know different culture and increase his or her knowledge. Furthermore, travelling gives always an enjoyment , stress free time from everyday’s monotous routine. In addition, for several health problems, paitents are advised to go to certain places in the country for the treatment.
In conclusion, with people getting excellent salaries and opportunities to work in different countries, people’s travelling has increased. Moreover, several travel websites with regular advertisements on popular desinations and economical prices, attracts people to plan their travelling tours. Last but not the least, tourism contributes tremendously in strebgthing the country’s economy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, as for, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68674698795 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99698654632 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4007387949 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.058823529 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252719704629 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845331795991 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688376315738 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156662629028 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831380340454 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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