Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some individuals believe that the Internet has strengthen the relationship of man, however, others perceive that this technology only make them feel distant to each other. These are due to convenience in communication and serves as a powerful tool of entertainment, respectively.
To begin with, the era of computers today has brought mankind a means to easily send messages to people all over the world. The method of communication has immensely proliferated since the dawn of the ages. Consequently, technology specifically the internet gave rise to the fastest and easiest means to send messages. From the various computer applications such as Skype, Facebook Messenger, Whatsapp and several others paved its way to diverse manner of communication. A distant person can now able to call, message, and video call his loved ones anytime and anywhere as long as there is network connection.
On the other hand, few individuals claim that the Internet is a complete package of their entire needs. This is especially true for the younger generations that could spend their whole day in front of their mobile phones or laptop and just surfing the net. Social media sites such as Facebook and Instagram have made countless people preoccupied even though they are not in the company of others. They do not need the presence of physical people around them as they could able to express their thoughts and feelings by online postings, blogs and forums. Indeed, a one-stop shop offering interesting services such as online updates of news and information and games as well.
Overall, communication to numerous persons in a quickest way possible is an essential advantage of the Internet while for some they may feel detached for the reason that they can live alone by simply being with their gadgets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'strengthened'.
Suggestion: strengthened
...dividuals believe that the Internet has strengthen the relationship of man, however, other...
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Line 10, column 47, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...l, communication to numerous persons in a quickest way possible is an essential a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17064846416 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82510993441 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0414800693 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125301996971 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385943769645 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371623201945 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692274456396 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011234369111 0.0609392437508 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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