eating at home or at resturant
Some people think that eating food at restaurants is more enjoyable than eating at home. People think that going to restaurants is more fun. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that eating at home is more preferable for me. The basis of my opinion is financial and social.
First, from the financial perspective, eating at home will save a lot of money. All the moms around the world try to cook and save money. For example, my mom always watch the cooking programs on the television and she tries to imitate them and actually she cooks delicious food and in the mean time she saves a lot of money. If all the moms try to cook at home that, like her , it will allow better financial situation for the whole family. the families will have a better financial situation. Even though some people might argue that eating at home all the time is boring, but that would benefit the whole family. Because of this it is best if we eat at home and save our money for some thing more beneficial.
It is also very reasonable to assume that eating at home will help to increase our social net work as a family. No one can ignore that staying at home and eating lunch with children while watching television is the best kind of entertainments ever. If the whole family mom, dad and the children enjoy their time together while they eat, that will be a good opportunity for them to talk and discuss important situation. That is not only beneficial for the children to have more contact with their parent but also for the parent to understand their children needs better. Although, adolescent some time feel that staying at home and eat with their parent is a kind of less freedom, but by time they could understand that spending time with their parent is important. It is essential for the families to eat at home and spend most of their times together.
In conclusion, for the reason I stated above, I think that eating at home is more preferable for me. Parent would eat healthy food at home. They could save money to go for a vacation or buy some thing more important. Eating at home help all the member of the family to understand each other better, as it is a good chance to talk and communicate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52173913043 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42428081408 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429951690821 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2793556586 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419330393494 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178119019847 0.076458572812 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166489982567 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325858253133 0.150856017488 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539234600898 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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