Students should be required to stay in school until the age of eighteen . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
Over the past few decades, there has been ambivalence over whether student should be stay at school until the age of eighteen or should equip students with proper skill for work, and this elicits stimulating disputations among the public.while some cynics claim that schools should tend students to leave schools, I sanguinely believe that appropriate professional skills and living lessons must also included in schools.
Conspicuously, there are a myriad reasons behind why students should acquire adequate skills to stay at schools. One of the most compelling reasons is that in current competitive world student should learn how they can get suitable job because of employers don’t accept to unqualified staff. Another cogent reason is that schools could developed social behavior of students which means student accept their own responsibility and normal communication in the society.This cause they prepared for facing different issues in globalized world.
Despite these beliefs, there are other skeptics who conjecture that student should leave schools until eighteen. Although it seems to be ostensibly veridical, this is not the case because there is some students are not suitable for education or in other words they are not built up for learning in academic environments.
To recapitulate, the most persuasive arguments are the ones that support schools should prepare students for both aspects of staying at schools or left it. Therefore , I strongly agree that these two should be of equal importance to authorized decision makers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'staid', 'stayed'?
Suggestion: staid; stayed
...ivalence over whether student should be stay at school until the age of eighteen or ...
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Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
...her cogent reason is that schools could developed social behavior of students which means...
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Line 2, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...and normal communication in the society.This cause they prepared for facing differen...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some students'?
Suggestion: there are some students
...veridical, this is not the case because there is some students are not suitable for education or in ot...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...staying at schools or left it. Therefore , I strongly agree that these two should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51046025105 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83394294912 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63179916318 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5405214874 50.4703680194 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.625 104.977214359 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252228053 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110006064163 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04720764659 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15459207906 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331851296091 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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