In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and business to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Does the advantage of this trend outweigh the disadvantage?
Nowadays, most of the cities are struggling with enormous population and the main reason for this change is because of mass migration. Many youngsters seeking suitable job opportunities move their families to the cities. However, the governments are promoting various companies to open their development centers in regional areas which are a good solution to address this issue. In the following passage, I will explain both the pros and cons and conclude which has edge over the other.
Does the government’s recent invitation to all organization to open their production centers will benefit regional areas? Yes. When companies open their branches in tier 2 and tier 3 cities, it will increase employment opportunities and this will encourage many youngsters to find the job in their region itself. This will reduce the mass migration towards the cities. Moreover, infrastructure developments such as schools, hospitals, financial institutions etc, will be established in towns and villages. Additionally, the country will economically due to revenue generated from these areas. Thus, it is believed, when organization open development centers in areas around the cities, which will benefit the local community with spike in job opportunities and improvement in the country’s economy too.
On the other side, in many cases farmer’s cultivation land is being abducted by corporates, which creates lots havoc among them. For instance, Pepsi incorporation opened their production centre in Salem which caused many farmers to lose their fertile land. Furthermore, the regional community’s values will be affected by the invasion pf other nationals. In addition, the local people’s traditional job such as pot and furniture making will be slowly uprooted. Therefore, it is assumed, this trend affects the regional culture and traditional values tremendously.
To sum up, as the proverb says,” better late than never”. The regional areas should be greatly developed with better amenities and spike in job market is always sensible, but that should not hamper the local people’s traditional values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66355140187 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1750982995 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585669781931 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4139371088 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.941176471 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135649831818 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500386236225 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512659588804 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835471951625 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395444088513 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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