15. What is one of the most important decisions you have made? Why was this decision important? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
As a matter of fact, every once in a while, people made decision that could change the course of their life. For me, one of the most significant choices I have ever made is to go to medical school. It has profound effect to me since it is cemented my future profession, facilitated me to travel around the globe and also teach me the essential attribute to become a decent person.
First of all, this education dictate me to my future job as a doctor. I realize going to college not always mean you’ll end up with a certain job, however medical school offered quite specific route of occupation. Based on my experience, after graduated I had quite limited options, either to become physician, researcher, of consultant in pharmaceutical company. Unlike law major for instance, they could work in government, bank, or private company for varied position with different specialization. They could become consultant, field worker, or even director of the company since the knowledge applied to wide range of job. In the other hand, med school provided me specific skills to save life, from assisted baby delivery to give CPR in a heart attack patient. It only natural to become a medical doctor of job involved around it.
Second, this school teaches me attributes needed to become a kind person. The rigorous school and busy schedules require hard work, perseverance in the face of adversity, time management, and humor. I have to learn all the compulsory subjects such as human anatomy, pharmacology and pathology, which are impossible to finish in one or two months. Moreover, It take good time management to learn it in every spare time I have. Regrettably, even after all the study, sometimes the grade still not sufficient, instead give up and feel forlorn, I need to motivate myself to start all over with excitement and humor. Therefore, I need to be stronger in the face of hardship.
Finally, becomes a doctor also give me a chance to travel since it allowed me to work anywhere in the world. I could take a part in the doctor without border program or the International Red Cross Society. Since my skill needed and universal in everywhere in the world, I could practice medicine with international license and slight adjustment.
Ultimately, I realized the impact of the decision I made. Consider all the stated reasons, going to medical school is one of the best decisions I ever made
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, while, after all, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88019559902 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79734811442 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562347188264 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7667984579 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0476190476 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100320513249 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352046362671 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498693630217 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072875699398 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654124145456 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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