From the table, describe the schedule of the English teachers and the subjects of IELTS English Camp
The table illustrates information how the schedules between English subjects and the four teachers are going on.
Based on the table, IELTS English Camp has seven subjects and four teachers. They are Grammar, Speaking, Listening, Writing, Reading, Vocabulary, IELTS and TOEFL classes, and the English teachers; Zul, Wawan, Amsir and Roni.
For Grammar and IELTS class, all teachers are available to give the lesson, but Amsir is the only one teacher who cannot possible to teach Speaking and Listening. Wawan, the only one teacher who is available gives Writing lesson for student, and Zul is the only teacher who able to teach the vocabulary class. Both of Zul and and Wawan, they are the teacher that able to teach Reading. For teaching TOEFL class, between Wawan and Roni are the teachers.
All in all, they are Wawan and Roni who have same abilities, which are teaching over the 7 classes, and the others only possible to teach 4 English subjects.
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Sentence: For Grammar and IELTS class, all teachers are available to give the lesson, but Amsir is the only one teacher who cannot possible to teach Speaking and Listening.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and possible
Sentence: Wawan, the only one teacher who is available gives Writing lesson for student, and Zul is the only teacher who able to teach the vocabulary class.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to available and gives
Sentence: Both of Zul and and Wawan, they are the teacher that able to teach Reading.
Description: The token and is not usually followed by a conjunction, coordinating
Suggestion: Refer to and and and
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 70 100
Those are extra:
They are Grammar, Speaking, Listening, Writing, Reading, Vocabulary, IELTS and TOEFL classes, and the English teachers; Zul, Wawan, Amsir and Roni.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 160 200
No. of Characters: 761 1000
No. of Different Words: 70 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.557 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.756 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.213 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 47 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.576 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.125 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.497 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.742 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.255 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4