Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this?
It is sometimes argued that fast food consumption is on the increase almost all over the globe and it becomes extremely popular among people especially youngsters. While a group of people assert that this is a positive aspect in food industry, I believe that there are some negative impacts.
There are various reasons why I would argue that consuming fast food as a staple food is harmful for the body. Firstly, fast foods are not nutritious and healthy, they are full of fat and their nice flavor is just because of the spices that are used in making them. Secondly, eating junk foods have some detrimental effects on the body's organism functionality and consequently the consumers would suffer diseases such as stroke, heart attack and blood pressure and obesity in children which are debilitating in the future for the sufferer. Finally, some traditional foods will be superseded by fast foods which will result in diminishing the culture and customs of societies. To prove my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that in developed countries people are more interested in consuming fast foods instead of eating traditional cuisines.
On the other hand, there have been a number of positive aspects in expansion of fast foods in different nations. Nowadays, people are always on the go and they do not have enough time for a proper sit down meal, as a result fast foods are one of the best choices for those who are always in hurry. Furthermore, fast food industry opens doors to more job opportunities and it motivates governments and wealthy people to invest in this field which had an impressive impact on food chain in recent years. Moreover, Fast foods are usually cheaper than other kinds of foods such as steaks, pastas, fish and the like, so that could be a better choice for tourists, collage students and business men.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits of consuming fast foods in countries, the negative impact outweigh the positive ones. I believe the fast food consumption should be restricted and it is the only way to protect the next generation from debilitating diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98895027624 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65443597417 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544198895028 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2319466095 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.923076923 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250590939923 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989833183651 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045422146255 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167190208882 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496419897872 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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