Nowadays many big cities become overcrowded. Why is it happening, in your opinion? What measures could be taken to prevent it?
Today, it is being noticed that more and more people prefer to move and live in bigger urban centers like metros, cosmopolitan cities and bigger towns, which is resulting in increasing of urban population at an unprecedented rate. This development and phenomena can be rooted to many grounds.
The primary cause of this expanding crowd in big cities can be sourced to the compulsion of people to look for better opportunities in career and education. As the rural areas and regional cities and towns face a severe shortage of facilities that can assist in providing opportunities for the people for work and education, the people move towards bigger centers in pursuit of their objectives and ambitions. Better education and highly paid jobs and more opportunities for business play a major role in improving the standard of living of people.
Besides looking for opportunities, people also seek better amenities like healthcare, transportation, entertainment and other facilities that are laid by the municipal authorities at the disposal of the inhabitants of big metropolitan like stable and better electricity and water supply etc. these facilities are only accessible in big cities and not in smaller towns and regions.
Several people have suggested ways to prevent cities from being overcrowded. They feel that the smaller cities, towns and regions must get all the support of government and authorities and other important ingredients that can help develop, foster and raise the prospects for better education. Government must also introduce initiatives that boost economic activities in regions that are lagging behind. Taking these steps will definitely stop migration of people to bigger cities.
In conclusion, I feel that this problem is a bigger issue and governments across the world must find some workable solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, so, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43055555556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94502582049 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1277051221 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101439180571 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476341500053 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579153862162 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533689730297 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284215689123 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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