Endotherm animals
The passage expresses the idea that although most of the modern reptiles are not endotherm animals; which means they can't maintain their body temperatures; dinosaurs are endotherm animals like mammals. On the other hand, the professor is strongly against this idea and in her opinion, the evidence which is stated in the text is not necessarily proving that dinosaurs are endotherms. She discussed some other evidence which might be stronger enough to show the opposite idea, dinosaurs are not endotherm animals.
The first evidence provided by the passage is the dinosaurs living conditions. Forasmuch as most of the fossils are discovered in polar sites, the conclusion is that these creatures were living in cold areas and they couldn't live there unless if they were endotherms to maintain their body temperature in those harsh climate conditions. But, the professor said these cold regions were not such as cold as what we might think and in the past the weather was warmer than today so they could live there even without any demand on endothermic conditions. Even if the weather was so cold they could migrate to another area or hibernate like other reptiles.
Another evidence discussed in the text is their body formation and the location of their legs under their body. The reading suggests that this form of body can be seen only in the endotherm animals because they need to run and keep on their physical movement. However, the professor repudiated this explanation and she illustrated the reason why their legs are underneath the body. She said because of their large heavy body which they need it those days, the legs were under the body not at the body's sides.
Finally, as stated in the passage there are especial dense canals in dinosaur fossils which are named, "Haversian canals'. These canals are characteristic of endotherm animals which could help them to grow fast. Nevertheless, the professor conflicted this rapid growth and as she said, this rapid growth was not a durable constant growth and after a while, it inclined to a slower pace, especially when they faced cool weather conditions. But, endotherm animals grow at a constant fast pace even in harsh conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...not endotherm animals; which means they cant maintain their body temperatures; dinos...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ures were living in cold areas and they couldnt live there unless if they were endother...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1373.03311258 135% => OK
No of words: 364.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07967032967 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5936670455 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472527472527 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 419.366225166 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.95048276 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224144256987 0.272083759551 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966034979947 0.0996497079465 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128037638196 0.0662205650399 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149085403384 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709711373978 0.0443174109184 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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