Do you agree or disagree with this following statement?playing computer game i a waste of time.children should not be allowed to play themUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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...ugh history childrens entertainment ways have been developed , once upon a time t...
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...technology that every corner of our life is enfuenced by it they are more intere...
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...r life is enfuenced by it they are more interested in amusements which are based...
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...permitting them instead of avoiding them to paly computer games would be better o...
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...e into the most outstanding reasons. its true that some coputer games are doubtl...
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...me coputer games are doubtlessly harmful , for example the games which are complet...
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...r example the games which are completely violence and destruction , games that l...
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...games which are completely violence and destruction , games that learn kids to o...
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...re completely violence and destruction , games that learn kids to open fire to c...
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...o reason and only because they are enemy therefore childrens future affected by t...
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...hildrens future affected by them severly , but new generation of computer games ...
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...by them severly , but new generation of computer games are not designed just fo...
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...ew generation of computer games are not designed just for having fun or roughne...
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...es are not designed just for having fun or roughness propagation , there is a hi...
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...for having fun or roughness propagation , there is a high complex thought behind...
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... roughness propagation , there is a high complex thought behind them not only i...
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...e is a high complex thought behind them not only in regarded to maral values bu...
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...a high complex thought behind them not only in regarded to maral values but als...
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... in regarded to maral values but also to turning simple digital games to the m...
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...ded to maral values but also to turning simple digital games to the mind chalen...
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... also to turning simple digital games to the mind chalenging ones! As result, ...
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...f them have potential for elevating kids mentally skills . mind creativity , pow...
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...ial for elevating kids mentally skills . mind creativity , power of solving p...
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...al for elevating kids mentally skills . mind creativity , power of solving pr...
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...ids mentally skills . mind creativity , power of solving problem , acuuracy ,...
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... creativity , power of solving problem , acuuracy , speed of action will improve...
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... , power of solving problem , acuuracy , speed of action will improve theough ap...
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...prove theough appropriate using of games . As I study in many countries this kind ...
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...in many countries this kind of games are beneficial as educational tools in order...
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...ore clever and their boosting efficiency . In addition games could be performed to...
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...ever and their boosting efficiency . In addition games could be performed to teach kids ...
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...trol over time when are using technilogy and computer game is an exciting begenin...
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...o enhance their freewill and manage time . Because these kind of games are often i...
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...uded of so much step and sometimes never end anf if children be able to use it ap...
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...tely they will be success in future and dont be one of them who are addicated to v...
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...ey will be success in future and dont be one of them who are addicated to virtua...
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...ccess in future and dont be one of them who are addicated to virtual space. Comp...
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...ess in future and dont be one of them who are addicated to virtual space. Computer ga...
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...om parents every time they behave nicely . as I mentioned prevent children from...
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...ents every time they behave nicely . as I mentioned prevent children from playi...
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...is almost impossible when they deal with technology most of the times instead of...
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...cilities correctly at childhood and also I guess educational system should put a...
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...ood and also I guess educational system should put away all old tradition ways a...
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...to games to be part of educational chart .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, for example, i guess, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00959232614 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6958759739 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57793764988 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.043718321 48.9658058833 384% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.9 100.406767564 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.7 20.6045352989 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 51.0 5.5376344086 921% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22325800284 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944616100459 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340345695003 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127006606358 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226887686604 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 11.7677419355 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 58.1214874552 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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