Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Discuss your views.
Children are deemed as the future of a nation so good parenting is lucrative in building a confident and skilled future generation. Some people assert that women triumph over men to make better parents. However, critics argue that fathers play a paramount role in upbringing juveniles. Here, I would like to discuss both views with my own perception.
To begin with, mothers have a greater role in raising children out of their inherent abilities and social responsibilities. To elaborate, mothers parenting raise child with not only proper care but also with deep affection. Hence, mothers are considered as superior parent to nurture their children. Furthermore, mothers spend abundant time with their off springs which, is worthwhile for better understanding and strong bonding between both. On the contrary, the opposite wind is also there.
In contrast, father too play a crucial role in overall development of a child. To be precise, fathers are mostly bread winners for the family and source of earnings also so that they are responsible for securing the quality of education, health , food as well as shelter to child. Thence, father have a big hand to bring the air of security in a family.
From my notion, both the aspects have their own significance. Undoubtedly, maternal instincts are phenomenal for molding the offspring on social &moral grounds. However, the fraternity level of father is equally significant in a child’s life to face the world with courage.
To recapitulate, both roles, father and mother are very important for the proper upbringing of a child. They should both perform their own roles to ensure a prosperous future for the baby.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, well, while, in contrast, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21033210332 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84640511151 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6507882155 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0588235294 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153367900487 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489431005197 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591375905917 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790079858392 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637915432409 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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