Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in education of their children. Discuss both views.
In this modern era, education has a very crucial role to play as it acts as a foundation for country’s future. Presently, some masses ponder that children should not be burdened by providing extra work for home. While, others think that additional work will benefit the children with their education. Here, I would like to throw lights on both sides.
There are multifarious points to shore up former view. Firstly, school homework is an unnecessary burden on children. To elaborate, homework does nothing to improve educational outcomes whereas, it make pupil too exhausted to do further study when they return home. Thus, additional work provided by school leads a stressful and disturbed lifestyle to students. Moreover, repetition at home consumes ample of time that can be worthwhile to contribute in other physical activities to stay fit and fiddle.
Numerous reasons to ensure latter point of view. To begin, homework plays a paramount role to teach a child be more responsible towards his studies. To illustrate, practicing at home not only forced them work independently but also to think individually and creatively in their academic task. Hence, this motivates the children to analyze and solve the problem on their own as well as liable for their studies.
From my notion, both aspects have their own significance. Home assignments may create extra pressure over the head of students but I do believe that it makes them full prepared and dedicated towards study.
To recapitulate, homework certainly has the drawbacks, but I still assure that the benefits outweigh them in long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mprove educational outcomes whereas, it make pupil too exhausted to do further study...
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...provided by school leads a stressful and disturbed lifestyle to students. Moreove...
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...believe that it makes them full prepared and dedicated towards study. To recap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23552123552 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82696680696 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671814671815 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1514580067 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306851315788 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849879667936 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702136592074 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141214413991 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639395477425 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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