People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
People, nowadays, are more encouraged to get enrolled in college or universities though it purpose is very hard to define. Securing a good a job can be the resolution of it, apart from this, gathering different kinds of experience and more opportunity to seek knowledge can also be a good reason of it. In my opinion, whatever the purpose of pursuing higher education, it should not be forgot that these people are becoming wise person by showing their interest to learn.
Research based knowledge is very important in present time. At university, this option is available and learners are always interested to gather this type knowledge. Beside this, they generally get a mentor who advise them about their works and help them to become an expert on a specific field. Another interesting part is the scope of having subject based knowledge. At the school level, it is very hard for a pupil to study a specific subject rigorously. At the tertiary level, they have the opportunity to go through their preferred subject. So, research and subject specific knowledge is always a point of attraction for a knowledge seeker.
Additionally, job prospective of a graduate is always very bright. Various companies in their job advertisement seek for those candidates who have completed their BA and MA degree. Not only this, sometimes monthly payments also depend on university degree. Moreover, standard of a person can be determined by his level of education.
In conclusion, post-secondary education is very important considering the present context of our society and job market. Furthermore, it is not only gaining experience or job preparation but seeking various prospective of knowledge is an important aspect of attending in college or university. I think it is a good practice for the further development of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, apart from, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16498316498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00665671171 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1053862476 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1326731063 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408145520575 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404648299177 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797900809784 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253477739166 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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