People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
People, nowadays, are more encouraged to get enrolled in college or universities though its purpose is very hard to define. Securing a good a job can be the resolution of it, apart from this, gathering different kinds of experience and more opportunity to seek knowledge can be a good reason of it. In my opinion, whatever the reason of pursuing higher education, it should not be forgot that these people are becoming wise person by showing their interest to learn.
Research based knowledge is very important in present time. At university, this option is available which always attracts the learners. Beside this, they generally get a mentor who advise them about their works and help them to become an expert on a specific field. Another interesting part is the scope of having subject based knowledge. At the school level which is very hard for a pupil to study a specific subject rigorously. At the tertiary level, they have the opportunity to go through the subject which they prefer to study. So, research and subject specific knowledge is always a point of attraction for a knowledge seeker.
Additionally, job prospective of a graduate is always very bright. Various companies in their vacancy advertisement seek for those candidates who have completed their BA and MA degree. Not only this, sometimes, monthly payments also depend on university degree. Moreover, standard of a person can be determined by his level of education. Because it indicates not only his merit, but the assurance of a good future. Finally, chance to get a good job and worth of a man or woman depends on the standard of higher education.
In conclusion, post-secondary education is very important considering the present context of our society and job market. Furthermore, it is not only gaining experience or job preparation but seeking various prospective of knowledge is an important aspect of attending in college or university. I think it is a good practice for the further development of a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, apart from, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94587850796 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5130969559 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134075350574 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381183259161 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413842094736 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805809923706 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327249448891 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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