xhiring more staff
The article stated that 4-day work per week has positive influence on the whole of employing the system and provide three reasons.The lecture stated that this concept is wrong and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading stated shortened workweek would increase the profits and employee feel more rested and alert, as a result.However, the lecture contends that, it is a risk.It can decrease the quality of life and lower workability and in this situation, they lose their job because management posts offer to the person that works in 5 days.
Second, the reading avers that hiring more staff for ensuring the same amount of work has no increase in payroll cost.However the lecture opposes this point by saying hiring more staff means more office and more computers for them, furthermore, each of the employees has the same amount of medical benefit and train.
Third, the reading claims that hiring more staff can increase the unemployment rate, the man contradicts that some employees want to have extra time off work, so they work 5 days per week, moreover, they want more salary and benefits.It can increase the unemployment rate.
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...ver, they want more salary and benefits.It can increase the unemployment rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 191.0 270.72406181 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06806282723 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53865702178 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591623036649 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 419.366225166 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 21.2450331126 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4888144725 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 242.0 110.228320801 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.75 21.698381199 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.75 7.06452816374 308% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220314270732 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125397190121 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114139295059 0.0662205650399 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125397190121 0.162205337803 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114139295059 0.0443174109184 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.3589403974 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 53.8541721854 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.0289183223 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.498013245 198% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.2008830022 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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