you wish to enroll in a course at an Australian college. You have already written a letter to the college asking for information but have received no reply. Write a letter to the college explaining your concern because the course will start in less than two months,
-you need to know if you can still enroll
-you also require further information about the course, including the cost
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing with regard to a letter I have sent to you, dated 4th of March, asking about the terms and conditions of enrolling in computer and Technology course which will begin in 27th of March in your college.
My name is Rahi Honarvar and I am interested in attending a Computer course that will be held in your college in the next 2 weeks. I have sent a letter to ask about the course conditions and pre requirement but unfortunately I have received no answer yet and consequently I am not enable to make a plan for my studying since I have a full time job and I should manage working and studying at the same time. Since there are just two weeks to the beginning of the course, I wonder if it is possible for me to enroll for the course and attend the classes.
In view of this, I need some extra information about this course such as the duration of the course, the cost and the pre requirement. I have got the bachelor degree in mathematics and need to know if there is any course that I should take before attending and registering this mentioned course.
I am looking forward to your swift answer.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...no answer yet and consequently I am not enable to make a plan for my studying since I ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e a plan for my studying since I have a full time job and I should manage working and stu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o your swift answer. Yours sincerely, Rahi Honarvar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, so, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42396313364 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57730198195 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557603686636 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7861652224 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 16.8248392259 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314468906407 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113776339628 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732587870395 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162289309665 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103142379183 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.